“Lost a planet Master Obi-Wan has. How embarrassing …”
It’s pretty amazing when children write. They have such good ideas. Not only do I give them advice in kindergarten and the writing class but they come up with amazing feedback for each other and me. The children enjoy getting into pairs and sharing one thing they enjoyed and one way to improve their writing. A first grader suggested that I add what my dream is in the dove poem so I added that to the poem:
http://www.roykindelberger.com/poemsideas-for-children.html